Reviews for Summer Afternoons

Jessie My Love
2005-11-21
ch 1,

Aww so sweet. I love fluff go fluff! Fluff reminds me of marshmellows...and marshmellows make me hungry...dangit i just mad myself hungry >.> ANywas great story I really liked it

adios ~.^

Eyes of Amethyst
2005-11-15
ch 1,

This was a short yet fluffy piece. ^_^ I've been reading too many serious stories that it feels good to read a piece that's just about love. The only thing I have to complain about is the slight choppiness of the piece, but otherwise it was a nice read. Keep it up! ^_^

ps: Am I assuming that the fairy is human-sized or really small? If the fairy was really fairy-sized... then... you know. ^_^ The kissing scene is kinda hard to imagine. But blame that on my tired school-stressed brain... ^_^

ps: Would you mind reviewing my story "Lunar Chaos"? Any form of reviews are greatly appreciated, since I would like to improve my writing (praise is good, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, and flames are accepted, as long as they have a good reason). But please don't feel forced to. ^_^

~Eyes of Amethyst

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