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| The piano 2005-11-23 ch 1, | Yet again another great piece of work. |
| simpleplan13 2005-11-20 ch 1, | i like this.. especially those last two lines.. great job... shorter than usual for you but still awesome |
| catseyeview 2005-11-17 ch 1, | Excellent manipulation of language...loved the question posed in suspense to the ending! |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-15 ch 1, | Yet we use the term As flippantly as, I love you -I've really learned not to trust words anymore; I mean someone can tell you that they love you until they turn blue in the face but its the actions that show it the most. Well done. Much love,Juliet. |
| wonderland is different now... 2005-11-14 ch 1, | interesting...very true...so flippant we used things, yet how much do we really mean them? mel |