I'm usually not a fan of vampire fiction, but this one is rather well written!

I would suggest better spacing/paragraphing, though. ^_^

I loved it. It could use a couple small changes, but it was wonderful. I've also written a story very similar to this story. I've also written a story called "Brown Eyes," but I never posted it, just like I never posted the one similar to this one. Thanks for the review. It really made me feel better about my story. I'm working on writing some more stories right now, and I should have a couple more posted by the end of the week, at least, I hope I will.

I'd love to talk with you about writing, and ideas for stories and such. We could even have our own little compititions between each other every now and then. If you have MSN Instant Messenger, let me know, because we can talk through that. If you have it, add "SilverElement@msn.com" to your friends list. If you add me, it'll let me know, and it'll let me add you. I hope to get more reviews from you in the future.

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Ah... the vampire's curse... blood lust.

After the lengthy review you left me I couldn't not come take a look at your works.

They look good and I look forward to reading more from you.