this is a really, really great story. i can feel the characters, see them, and all thats even happened so far is a lot of driving and a few hotels! Please, if you can, continue this!

Any possibility for an update? I'm liking this so far...

Awesome story. Warped tour, AWESOME! I went too who was the band you wanted to see the most?

Update soon. I read the whole thing in one sitting.

totally love this chapter, your really bring out the raw emotion. Me want to kiss the chapter. You create the awesomest characters ever and yeah...

Maybe you can give a little bit more details about Fox and maybe something more about Lauren for that matter because you don't really know why she became anorexic and what her background is like.

Other than that, great story and keep on writing you ultra cool author.

Aw...poor Vinny. Glad he has a friend he can stay with. I'm still not sure about Fox though. Who knows I could be wrong.

I don't entirly trust this Fox person. Then again i read The Serial Killer Files. If you like Vampire stories check mine out. It's a work in progress. But back to your story I'm glad your up-dateing again. I like the idea of the story and to see where it goes. The story itself has a lot of options as to where it can go. Love it!

Coolness. an up-date. Awesome so far can't wait to see where it goes!

Interesting story. I'm also curious about the clinic question. All Hail those From Tucson! *starts humming home sweet home*

I have just finished reading the new one and im intrested. keep up the good work and please still update Kiss of death...Thanks

I liked Chapter 2 quite a bit, you seem to find your flow a little better here.

I particularly enjoyed the description of the hotel room Vinny imagined, it was quite accurate. I also liked how they didn't get one room together. That makes me happy (although I'm assuming they eventually fall in love?)because you're not rushing things between them.

I can't wait to read more!-Benjamin Kyle Lawe

I liked it. Although it sounds a tiny bit cliche, the setting is actually vivid and it seems perfect for the situation.

Your descriptions are wonderful. I could feel the air (I love desert air) and see the desert at night.

One spelling mistake I caught was Lauren's fingers being "Could" instead of "cold", other than that I didn't see anything else. Some of your phrases were a bit cliched as well, such as "heaved a great sigh" in the beginning, and your description of the sign really being a cactus in the beginning could have sounded a little more natural instead of forcedly humourous (sp?).

Now I'm on to Chapter Two!

Thanks for the story :)-Benjamin Kyle Lawe