O, very good job. I liked it alot (even though you've probably heard that alot before). It's hard for some to write short poetry and convey the meaning. You kept it short and simple... yet not so simple... hehe... I'm not making any sense. Sorry.

~Kat

Very vivid with the contrast. Well written.

Interesting, and maybe a little disturbing. I got strnage images from this.

Peace, Daze

interesting images

Powerful detail.

Juliet.