Slightly pathetic, isn't it? I thought this had really good flow and I also loved the descriptions. "Nose-bleeds taste like candy." adds to the vileness of the poem and the overall theme. Good job with this one.

"nose-bleeds taste like candy"

you... are... a... GOD

I don't assume for a second I understood you, but I was instantly transfixed and completely held captive by your graceful imagery peppered with gritty realism. It's beautiful, on too many levels to express.

This, somehow, is almost a three-second thrill in itself. There is a scene, but no story. Which is not necessarily a bad thing. It hits you like grafitti art, burst of color that may or may not have meaning.

sniffing paint. heh. nice piece. thanks for the "descriptive" one word review of one of my pieces btw.

Pretty good. Like I always say I wish I could write a poem like that. Keep it up (124 works thats insane in a good way)

P.S. It seems like no one reviews your work anymore without you asking them, so if you don't mind, can you review my latest book Swordplay?

this is how i used to want to write, but could never manage to make into my own style. i can say now that it is not the way i write, but could be the reason i admire your work.

also, you have wonderful taste in music. elliott smith is my favorite.

this is ,on so many levels, gorgeous. everything is done to perfection. just beautiful.

* noelle

WHIPPIDS! j/k

nice work...