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| boys kiss girls 2007-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseSlightly pathetic, isn't it? I thought this had really good flow and I also loved the descriptions. "Nose-bleeds taste like candy." adds to the vileness of the poem and the overall theme. Good job with this one. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuse"nose-bleeds taste like candy" you... are... a... GOD |
| in theory 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI don't assume for a second I understood you, but I was instantly transfixed and completely held captive by your graceful imagery peppered with gritty realism. It's beautiful, on too many levels to express. |
| dollface and her cancer 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThis, somehow, is almost a three-second thrill in itself. There is a scene, but no story. Which is not necessarily a bad thing. It hits you like grafitti art, burst of color that may or may not have meaning. |
| Naibz 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abusesniffing paint. heh. nice piece. thanks for the "descriptive" one word review of one of my pieces btw. |
| amazingal69 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abusePretty good. Like I always say I wish I could write a poem like that. Keep it up (124 works thats insane in a good way) P.S. It seems like no one reviews your work anymore without you asking them, so if you don't mind, can you review my latest book Swordplay? |
| singlefile 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abusethis is how i used to want to write, but could never manage to make into my own style. i can say now that it is not the way i write, but could be the reason i admire your work. also, you have wonderful taste in music. elliott smith is my favorite. |
| poetic abortion 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abusethis is ,on so many levels, gorgeous. everything is done to perfection. just beautiful. ~* noelle |
| Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseWHIPPIDS! j/k nice work... |