|Reviews for Texas Shoe Shine|
| boys kiss girls 2/6/07 . chapter 1
Slightly pathetic, isn't it? I thought this had really good flow and I also loved the descriptions. "Nose-bleeds taste like candy." adds to the vileness of the poem and the overall theme. Good job with this one.
| the naked civil servant 2/24/06 . chapter 1
"nose-bleeds taste like candy"
you... are... a... GOD
| in theory 1/6/06 . chapter 1
I don't assume for a second I understood you, but I was instantly transfixed and completely held captive by your graceful imagery peppered with gritty realism. It's beautiful, on too many levels to express.
| dollface and her cancer 11/29/05 . chapter 1
This, somehow, is almost a three-second thrill in itself. There is a scene, but no story. Which is not necessarily a bad thing. It hits you like grafitti art, burst of color that may or may not have meaning.
| Naibz 11/27/05 . chapter 1
sniffing paint. heh. nice piece. thanks for the "descriptive" one word review of one of my pieces btw.
| amazingal69 11/27/05 . chapter 1
Pretty good. Like I always say I wish I could write a poem like that. Keep it up (124 works thats insane in a good way)
P.S. It seems like no one reviews your work anymore without you asking them, so if you don't mind, can you review my latest book Swordplay?
| singlefile 11/26/05 . chapter 1
this is how i used to want to write, but could never manage to make into my own style. i can say now that it is not the way i write, but could be the reason i admire your work.
also, you have wonderful taste in music. elliott smith is my favorite.
| poetic abortion 11/15/05 . chapter 1
this is ,on so many levels, gorgeous. everything is done to perfection. just beautiful.
| Gabriel Lyman 11/14/05 . chapter 1