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| The Return 2005-11-15 ch 1,   | this is a great piece of writing. i really felt the emotion. it kind of reminds me of a situation one of my friends is in. |
| lee151 2005-11-15 ch 1, | i like this one... it works well. it's deep, and it's something i can realte to so it means a lot to me. |
| Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-14 ch 1, | a bit long, but worth the price, excellent work, you make it seem so real |