oh my god, i love this.

This chapter was so sweet and relaxing; it was a roller coaster, intense in the beginning, then smoothing out, and extreme again towards the end.

I love this story, and I thought it was clear about Mischa's brother from the first chapter...I like your writing style and the way it's written and the plot is getting better and better. The characters are awesome, too. You're an amaing writer.

yay this is excellent.

Very different. Please continue! I don't think it's to confusing as long as you're planning on answering all the unanswered questions. Otherwise it may turn out confusing. lol.

Once again, another lovely chapter where I am beginning to see more to Misha's family life, but the part that had left me confused in chapter 5 was Damien's change in attitude; it was a slight drastic change from his normal character, which left me confused. Maybe something is starting to change in him? It leaves me anticipating more of that change from him and looking forward to how he will change with Misha. (Or am I just looking to into it?) It leaves me thinking in a very insightful way.

I was confused, but once I read some of the other reviews I understood.

I didn't know why he killed his brother, but now with the mentioning of "Games" and someone who reviewed who actually said that they had raped him when he was little, and so now I understand.

Very interesting chapter. (:

I loved this chapter because despite the sickness and imagery he didn't get attacked. The kitten imagery was interesting as was the drawing!

I think people get confused because we don't know exactly where this is set, who these people are.. and we're assuming this guy and his own bro used to rape him when he was a kid, and he killed the brother and is now a prisoner of the brother's bf. But nothing is certain or detailed so it's pretty mysterious. Plus the relationship between the two is very much mood swings at the mo.

Awesome writing. Plz update soon! :)

Wow, this was a different change of atmospheres, leaves me wondering very much. Once again nicely written but now you leave me very confused.

I'm kind of confused but in a...trippy way, like I was on the drugs they are forcing into Misha.

I'm not sure if you're trying to do that, but I like the effect of it.

I like how you write and the characters, and the whole scene. update soon~

Something about this draws me, and I don't know why because so far it's been pretty sadist...

I think you just want to see things getting better for him. And it's really well written, especially the touch with the bear. The menace is also very realistic.

So I can't say I'm enjoying it, because it usually make sme want to cry, but I'm pretty hooked on it.

Please update soon! :)

Once again, another good chapter, short but very insightful :)

wow, this story is insanely cool. right on, man. keep doing what you do cause it sure as ** is working.

I really like the way you've written this, I can imagine each scene clearly. :)

I love it. It's really captivating in that dark, twisted way and entices you in. So. It's really great, update when you can.