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Reviews For: The Effects of Tedium on the Imagination

Chandra-Moon
2005-11-16
ch 1,
abuseHa, the last stanza made me laugh. Very interesting imagery--"of the kisses of chap stick and green tea". You are obviously quite talented--plus, i think most people (especially writers) can relate to daydreams and such when bored. So, good job.
Kita_Oimikada
2005-11-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow this is cool. good work ^-^
BJ Worth
2005-11-15
ch 1,
abuseVery good imagery in this one, very vivid. That's some potent boredom there...
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