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| Chandra-Moon 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseHa, the last stanza made me laugh. Very interesting imagery--"of the kisses of chap stick and green tea". You are obviously quite talented--plus, i think most people (especially writers) can relate to daydreams and such when bored. So, good job. |
| Kita_Oimikada 2005-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow this is cool. good work ^-^ |
| BJ Worth 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good imagery in this one, very vivid. That's some potent boredom there... |