I love the last line. This has...well...attitude? I can't think of a better way to describe it. whether or not I can put words to it I like it.

ANNA

nice little snapshot.

There's somewhat of a stressed expression here, as if you are touching the darker side of yourself a bit, "pink never really looked good on me" is a killer line.

That's a nice : Please R&R mine, it would mean alot to me.

this is a gorgeous little piece. Clever, bitter and truly mesmorising. I love it :)

Interesting little two sentence poem. Way to be your own girl. Nice job with this.