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| Rubyme 2006-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseI think its just fine, you can't really give advice for poetry, as each writer has their own style; there is no wrong or right. |
| BJ Worth 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseActually, I thought it was pretty good. The descriptions were quick and vivid, but overall the poem is a little bit vague... |