Aww its really sweet and sad, I loved how you expressed the pigeons fear and total lack of understanding of the human world and of you and your dads intentions. Was really emotive, especially for the use of such a unconventional beautiful creature as a Pigeon, which most people shrug off as a a diseased rodent with wings. I really liked this piece, kinda moved me a little back into childhood, when I remember we made a very similar attempt to save a dying bird, but alas, to the same end sadly. well keep it up. always love reading your works. thanks again for all your reviews

I know what you mean about the pigeon. One night, my dad found a dove huddled next to the house for warmth. It didn't survive the night.

aw, how seems very upsetting.

bit stiff of form for me but well written.

Not to make you feel bad...But rice kills birds. Sad poem though...i like... Odd subject, but beautifully written.