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| backseats on thursdays 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseAMAZING! **, I have no other way to say it! Definetly connected to this one. Keep it up! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I lvoe poems with this theme of talking to someone. This one hit me deep,it's the kind of thing that leaves you with so many mixed emotions. keep it up. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved the beginning about the singing (I had a boy like that once) he's one of those mysterious people that you can't take your eyes off of or your vision will blur; the only thing clear is them. And then that final line about closing your eyes; so true to the situation. If they told you to close your eyes you would, but you would run the risk of being blinded to everything else for the rest of your life. Wonderful piece. Juliet. |
| Extraho-Uxor 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseshort and to the point. not your usual style, I admit, but considering that poetry is an everchanging art... well done |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAlmost made me cry, this poem of yours. It was so sad yet so touching and beautiful. EB |
| sunday night sky 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuselovely work, really beautiful. *adds to faves* |