*takes a bow*

I`ve been waiting for you to post something for a while^^ I missed reading your wonderful poems! This one was different from your others though, I noticed that much immideately after a couple of lines. Even if I like your usual way of writing them this was really neat too. You always put such emotion into your poems, they touch the reader deeply. And oh how sad this one was. I like every part of it, it`s just so..whole^^

*hugs from a fan*

I thought this was pretty good. The first stanza was really nice, especially the first two lines. Some other parts... a bit predictable. Good writing, but predictable content. Still, nice work here.