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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-04-02 ch 1,   | Another very well written piece! The end ties everything together so nicely and even though its the end of the poem, it feels like the beginning of something else. Everything flows so wonderfully and nothing seems forced. Well done! |
| Xn-v 2007-03-25 ch 1, | Ah, good poetry... nothing better, nothing more I could ask for. ^^ Thankyou. *grins* |
| xForeverAndAlwaysx 2007-03-24 ch 1, | i really like this.. the ending has the perfect twist to it. it seems so sad, but at the end you pull it together with a glimmer of hope.. really well done. this will definetly be on my favorites list! --katy |
| MicroQueen15 2007-03-24 ch 1, | I really like how it sort of gets 'hopeful' at the end. Good Job. |
| x-XSirenX-x 2005-11-18 ch 1, | wow, it was great. I really liked it! |