Reviews for K for Catcher: Rough Draft

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Danielle 2008-10-19 ch 31,	That was the funniest thing ever when she was just satring and her team was yelling at her.
Danielle 2008-10-19 ch 26,	I loved this chapter. I am glad Kouki and Aki are resolved and Bryce is starting to get some "PLAY TIME" lol
Danielle 2008-10-18 ch 13,	I love your story, and I love jp. dramas also!
LJANG 2008-10-18 ch 51,	WHAT!? The ending screams sequel! I'm a bit sadden that it might not be in Alex's P.O.V, but a sequel is a sequel and I'm content with that. I'm yearning for more so I'll take anything at this point... I seriously love this fic! Benji's a sweetheart and I love his character, but Bryce & Alex ftw. Hopefully Benji will hook up with Hina or someone suited for him in the "sequel". Kouki... Tanaka Kouki/Koki from Kat-tun? I visited your website and notice that you're a fan of them. :P haha.
runwayx23 2008-09-27 ch 52,	This is the best story I've ever read on this website. Honestly, your character development was amazing, and I loved how the plot wasn't too predictable. I thought that you were probably going to end up having Alex not have to move as a last-minute decison at the end, but I stand corrected. I loved how you didn't just use cliches, and the fact that the plot always had refreshing new twists. I also like how you didn't just have Benji stop liking her, because that would have been pretty unrealistic. It made him seem real that he actually kept his feelings for her. Plus, the ending was amazing. It wasn't just some sappy, everything's solved in the end, cookie-cutter ending. I like how you left the readers guessing what happens in Alex/Bryce's future. Anyways, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY. It really was an amazing read and I'm glad I spend 2 days reading it!
Welcome To Meganland x3 2008-09-26 ch 53,	So its 2 in the morning right now... and it took me like 3 days to read this... AND IT WAS FRIGGIN AMAZING : ) You did really good with making the story into things i wouldn't have expected. most authors would have taken the easy way out but i noticed you made your story different...I think urs had a few less cliches than other ones like this. Like the ending. Any other author would have made it a last minute thing that alex didnt have to move. Its so completely obvious and i was expecting it. Then it didnt happen. I liked that. you did really well at the character developement of everyone which i liked. storys who dont do enough bother me, because i alway end up thinking "this is out of charactter" and apperantly its not. So good job on that too. I sort of knew she would end up with bryce from the first chapter. Because well, I dont know i guess u can always tell its going to be the people who dont like eachother in the beginning. But i liked that because it would be too boring if it was benji. When kuoki came back you changed it up a little. But not all the way, which im glad. But u still gave him a good role in a couple chapters. Okay, im rambling this is probably a hige review...Sorry! My rambling intensifies as the night goes on. Okay im done xD
Sage Witch 2008-09-21 ch 7,	I see I stand corrected.
Sage Witch 2008-09-21 ch 6,	I thought the dinner thing was going to be a joke, glad it wasn't.
Insane plus Insomniac makes... 2008-09-02 ch 36,	NOrmally, I don't go for this kind of stuff, but...wow. It's really good.
e n f a n t f o l 2008-08-15 ch 6,	I love Rei and his 'HENJIN' bit :) It's something I would totally do, and I'm proud of it. Great story.
TamarF 2008-08-12 ch 2,	lol, you totally stole Fisher's speech from Mean Girls. It's cool though, it was still funny in the story. Your characters seem a little young to be almost 18, but maybe I don't remember high school all that well.
atreyu love 2008-08-11 ch 35,	so Kei dating this girl, real drama or something? or is she going to get pregnant? XD lol
atreyu love 2008-08-10 ch 32,	ahh! i cant believe it! and isnt it the THIRD time theyve kissed? & im sad that Benji is sad D:
atreyu love 2008-08-10 ch 28,	oh god. benji is adorable~
clear vision 2008-08-07 ch 52,	this is a really cute story! i like it a lot. haha. though, i thought that there was some..unnecessary parts. well, this is an analogy i use a lot, your story if like a person/animal. the the plot and outline and the general details are like the skin and bones. then the actual events and all the inner details and the emotions and stuff are like the meat. you had that. however, i felt like there was some extra baggage too. as in, there was some fat. stuff that you can lose and it'll still be great. do you get what i mean? lol. even though i didn't entirely fall in love with the characters, i still liked it and i've even become slightly interested in baseball (and learned a few things). i take it that you're a baseball player? haha. well, yeah. great story. i really enjoyed it. (:

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