|Reviews for TIME|
| OneSilverWing 2/19/06 . chapter 1
ok, that one made me cry. Alot...
| Raspberry Twirl 2/1/06 . chapter 1
oh. my. god! that was awesome. you make the reader cling to every word! such a deep, double plot! wonderful discriptions, and images, and wow, wow! i love the story as a poem, so so deep!
thank you for the review, lots of smiles, raspberry twirl
| djsaxon2 1/28/06 . chapter 1
Sent a chill down my spine. Of what i've read so far, easily your best work. Well done!
| rap-sucks 12/26/05 . chapter 1
damn, that's sad. i like it when songs tell kinda tell a story (and that's one of the reasons i tend to like country music). that shows good writing talent.
| a-poets-soul-ablaze 12/25/05 . chapter 1
Whoah,yet again,beautiful work,very well-written!
| Terrafauna 12/12/05 . chapter 1
Wow... That was an amazing poem. I love the visual, the flow, the story... everything. It's great.
| twenty-second seduction 11/22/05 . chapter 1
| Evil Zipper 11/18/05 . chapter 1
lovely... simply lovely... the story is beautifully told
| arcane devices 11/15/05 . chapter 1
After a 7 month hiatus, I'd like to be one of the first to welcome you back. I truly, truly envy your talent to command and evoke words from the heart and transforing them into a picture. Welcome back. - ADD-san
| she's not breathing 11/15/05 . chapter 1
THAT was poetry and i am so speechless. i would point out all the lines i liked, but it would take a ridiculously long time and result in an inane length that you'd just scan over. so i shall restrain myself to gushing this:
that was execptionally beautiful. loved the personality in it, and how personal it was. also the formatting was brilliant. i applaud you. incredible poem.