ok, that one made me cry. Alot...

oh. my. god! that was awesome. you make the reader cling to every word! such a deep, double plot! wonderful discriptions, and images, and wow, wow! i love the story as a poem, so so deep!

thank you for the review, lots of smiles, raspberry twirl

Sent a chill down my spine. Of what i've read so far, easily your best work. Well done!

damn, that's sad. i like it when songs tell kinda tell a story (and that's one of the reasons i tend to like country music). that shows good writing talent.

Whoah,yet again,beautiful work,very well-written!

Wow... That was an amazing poem. I love the visual, the flow, the story... everything. It's great.

beautiful.

lovely... simply lovely... the story is beautifully told

After a 7 month hiatus, I'd like to be one of the first to welcome you back. I truly, truly envy your talent to command and evoke words from the heart and transforing them into a picture. Welcome back. - ADD-san

THAT was poetry and i am so speechless. i would point out all the lines i liked, but it would take a ridiculously long time and result in an inane length that you'd just scan over. so i shall restrain myself to gushing this:

that was execptionally beautiful. loved the personality in it, and how personal it was. also the formatting was brilliant. i applaud you. incredible poem.

k8