Hmm, I've felt this way before about a very, very special friend. Another piece beautifully written, I applaud you!

Wow... I love it. I had to read it a few times to really try and get every demension of it (and I still think I missed somethings... haha). This was great. I love the overall feel. That whole "I'd die for you...but it still wouldn't keep you alive" Ah I love it. The last line (as usual) is my favorite.

The part about Germany was very intruiging to me. That was one line I didn't quite understand totally. But I think maybe it's one of those lines that everyone can interpret differently. I love lines like that. You know? You can tailor them to fit you but still know that someone else wrote them. It makes the poem more real.

Anyway great job. The only thing I'd change is the title because I think it sounds sort of... western movie-ish. This poem is too deep to be associated with like Wild Bill or something. That's just minor, though. Overall, it was an excellent poem. Awesome awesome awesome.

omg. that is an amazing poem. it is really deep and sad. is it real and true? great great great work. keep it up!