I like how this ended, although I think it would have been nice to read about her first transformation.

Apart from that, I must praise on the fact that I didn't spot one spelling or grammatical mistake throughout this whole story which is quite rare. Thank you for submitting something that had a plot, that read well, was grammatically sound and amusing to read. Well done.

The girl and the guy should totally get together! They're so cute! ^_^ And she falls off the log, and he's like, "Graceful." If they don't get together I WILL KILL MYSELF.

lol.

Different and rather amusing