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| Lainiee 2007-12-14 ch 2,   | Really well written- you captured the essence of the questionable relationship, the whole realization of the defeat from the very beginning to the actual physical end without closure... It's sad in a realistic, truthful sense, and it never goes overboard with the angst but mostly, I think I enjoyed this so much because it's something I can relate to. Don't know if you're going to continue with this, as that this last bit sounds like you are, but if you don't, I think that's fine as well. Keep it up! |
| Rhea-lyze 2006-09-12 ch 1, | Steal away. It'd be nice if you just, you know, mentioned my name, gave a little credit. Thanks :) |
| Hope.And.What.Not 2006-09-12 ch 1, | i like it, its not emo at all actually just a little but not a lot. You wouldn tmind if a took a little of this to put in my story would you? Not the same words just a bit of the baseline, because i like it what can i say? True Calling |
| disabled account 2005-11-17 ch 1, | Surprisingly well-written and delightfully cynical. For some unidentifiable reason (as I have yet to claim a boy as my own, even as a friend) I feel a sense of literary kinship with you--I guess in loving someone as he/she is while seeing them at their most vulnerable while he/she is fixated on the rest of the world's approval, which can't see past his clothes or face or outward characteristics. Adieu, Kat |