Reviews for Ziana's Story in progress

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DarkElminster 2006-09-25 ch 13,	Woops... I missed a lot of plot. Of course. You put all of the plot in at the exact time I get distracted and forget to check. snickers Aww... Pithell is like a little brother to Ziana! It's cute. I'm still debating if he likes her though. At least Akrin got more pain this chapter. grin She really needs to die... but that's a start. I'm really curious as to what the sword actually IS though. My DM once ran a campaign where there was an ancient demon prince sealed inside a similar blade. It was cool! Maybe this is something like that? I'll eagerly await for more plot then! Excellent chapter and keep up the good work! Laters!
Niki Lemonade 2006-08-23 ch 13,	I too despise the tiny spittle of a back story for henchmen. But your characters are much more fleshed out than that, they have so much more integrity than most rpgs, that's what i love about this story!
oo-Julia-the-Great-oo 2006-08-23 ch 13,	well gez, I go off for a few days to a place without internet, and you get a new chapter of Ziana done. pout I didn't get to edit... c-c But woot for a new chapter anyway. ^-^ This indeed was a short chapter, but it was nice and foreshadowy...
Niki Lemonade 2006-08-03 ch 12,	need...more...awesome...story!!
Niki Lemonade 2006-07-17 ch 11,	I liked this chapter. Pithell's found another ally, and we learned a little more about all the characters, even Akrin. Can't wait for more of the awesomeness!
DarkElminster 2006-07-17 ch 11,	Oh! True names! Dangerous things, those. And I see plot! Yay! And Akrin got shut up for once. Improvements all around. -grin- It's good that Pithell is getting treated better anyway. I'd still feel more comfortable if you just killed Akrin off though. -hisses at her- Khlin reminds me a lot of a Lammasu. She seems noble enough anyway. I can't wait for the next chapter though! Hurry! -is happy-
tracy, other wise known as... 2006-07-16 ch 11,	i like this one. maybe even better then unholy way.
oo-Julia-the-Great-oo 2006-07-15 ch 11,	Again, I love Pithell. He's so cute.
tracy 2006-07-12 ch 10,	well another good story not finished. you know how well i like them. it's excellent
DarkElminster 2006-06-14 ch 10,	Well... at least I only had one chapter to read here. Not much has changed really. Hern's still a pansy mage, Ziana still needs anger management, and Akrin still needs... several poison darts to the face. c.c Well it developed the characters a little more and Pithell is free now! What was that though? Some type of acid ball? I'm not even going to attempt to identify the creature however. Now all you have to do is kill off Akrin and this story would be perfect! Hehe! Sorry for taking so long to review.
Kitten Lemonade 2006-06-07 ch 10,	Yay, it keeps getting better. Even though the story didn't advance much in this chapter, a lot happened, if you understand what I mean...haha.
oo-Julia-the-Great-oo 2006-06-06 ch 10,	Yo. K, I just finished editing this ole chapter, so whenever you're online next... you may receive it from me. :P I'm sure you did a good job yourself editing it, but... anyway! What was that crazy little critter, anyway? It was so very evil!
booksquirt 2006-06-06 ch 10,	This is a really great story. Keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON, YA HEAR?
Lady Silver fang 2006-05-27 ch 5,	Wow! Its been awhile hasn't it? o.o Sorry I have been a little busy, sorry I didn't come and review for a long time. Anyway I enjoyed this chapter! Thanks again for an enjoyable read. Bye now! Love ~LadySilverfang~ p.s: Thanks again for reviewing Erotica! You are a true friend!
DarmElminster 2006-05-18 ch 9,	That's funny. Everytime I see Pithell I always want to read it as Pit Hell instead. Ziana makes me think of Zelda every time I see her name... which fits the whole epic hero thing she has going on. Excellent story as usual! As a final side note, KILL OFF AKRIN! She deserves a horrible and embarrassing DEATH as soon as physically possible! You should have a flea or something bite her and she catches the Bubonic plague or something. That would kill both her and her reputation at the same time! YAY! Anyway, keep up the good work!

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