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| x-Krys-x 2005-11-16 ch 1,   | hey you, I'm so sorry I didn't tell you happy birthday yesterday, I got off before I had the chance and I had a lot of stuff that I meant to say, I hope we get to talk tonight!! And, this.. this is amazing. It's kind of seriously depressing because one thing that I wished for you more than anything was for you to be happy. Happier than you had always been. I'm so sorry that it isn't working out as i had hoped And.. I want to talk more. I miss you. Kelsey |
| RACHEL 2005-11-16 ch 1, | This is good like always...and I can picture it all happening in my head so thats always good...hope that never happens to you hun...never. |
| AznCarmii 2005-11-15 ch 1, | i dont get it...but i hold an incapability of understanding the "hidden meaning" in things...but happy birthday! heh. mine's tomorrow! hope you write more! |
| Wicked Witch Krandomity 2005-11-15 ch 1, | First off: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Now, story, not so happy. Really depressing. But really good. I liked how you made it realistic, and kept everything perfect for a short story. Some people that write short stories get too into it and some don't put enough, but you were just right. So yeah...dude, this was so depressing, though. I think it's the fact that it's realistic that made it depressing. A fine job though, a fine job. Once again, Happy Birthday! Cheers, ~W.W.Krandomity |