 S0ulSearching 2005-11-16 . chapter 1*cheers* AWSOME! I love it...and I know the feeling >_< Not a good one. But I love the way you worded this, and the imagery. Keep it up.--pammy- |
 Guitrman 2005-11-16 . chapter 1very powerful, and yes! guys do feel that way cuz that poem really sums it up!! excellent and top notch, wut wut! |
 fantasize 2005-11-15 . chapter 1thats really powerful. i think most girls and even guys could relate. it really hit me. good work |
 Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-15 . chapter 1very powerful imagery. Never let your inner self get you down. You can beat her! |
 Sally-andersonn 2005-11-15 . chapter 1I don't see how this is summed up by the summary. It is emtional and dark and angsty. |