   jesusfreak4031 2005-03-26 . chapter 1This reminds me kinda of SLAMpoetry. (Performance) Is it meant to be? |
| Zash 2003-04-24 . chapter 1 Ew... |
| Ellerfru 2002-02-02 . chapter 1 cool. |
| Cori-chan 2001-09-17 . chapter 1 Really good...and another one that could be rapped, hehe. I'm addin' you to favorite authors... |
| phantom12 2001-09-15 . chapter 1 i like this one ~phantom12~ |
| Lifeform 2001-09-13 . chapter 1 Once more I recognice myself in one of your poems. I have allways feelt that my body do not fit my mind though. But you have to live the life to the fullest, even if you don't fit in where you are. |
| Aras D'avinle 2001-02-10 . chapter 1 Once again....wonderful i love it..I relate in a strange way :) |
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