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sammygurl262316 2008-10-03 ch 25,	abuseOh wow. I love this story and all. But I gotta say, lynx is such a psycho and with that comes reese being a psycho too! I love them together though. :)
xSilentTearsx 2008-09-22 ch 25,	abuseDamn I did not see that coming! I thought Lynx would get caught not her - that was intense and downright creepy. Awesome story also great plot and mysterious characters. Overall Nice Job!
honey splattered brains 2008-09-03 ch 25,	abuse... awe man. they got caught. XD; i was soo hoping for them to not get caught. :
colormerealist 2008-08-25 ch 25,	abuseWoah! That was a great story, very well written and it had an amazing plot. Great work!
seetheworld 2008-08-05 ch 25, anon.	abuseYour story in one whole word was intense. The whole time it was so emotionally ** up. Everything about it is depressing,tragic,and revealing. BRILLIANT! Your dark sense of humor in the story was very well done. I stayed up till 3am to read the end of this and I can say I am content. Just one question-in the end was Lynx just setting her up? Did he ever truly like her? I think this story will always stay in my mind. One thing I know for sure is that it will always haunt me. And your title was what had me check it out. Reminding me of Natural Born Killers. The song I listened to for the last ending chapters was Master of Puppets by Metallica. Maybe thats why I think Lynx set everything up. I was influenced by the song. If you have time, you can answer my question with a yes or no. Or if your super nice you can expand :]
McShortShort 2008-07-25 ch 25,	abusehaha lynx isn't important
mylifeismine 2008-07-24 ch 1,	abuseNice story
EmotionsHaveNoBrains 2008-06-19 ch 25,	abuseGah!! I'm gonna kill YOU! Ugh I hate your endings as much as I love them. Your awesome at surprising your readers, although the fact that she would get cuaght instead of him had gone through my head, becuase of the evidence she left in the first murder, I still didn't really expect this ending. Loved Lynx and had to love Wolf even though he was the bad guy. ;) Keep writing I love your stories.
Dearcourtney 2008-06-09 ch 25, anon.	abuseI know you probably won't even reply to this, but I have to say, I found your story, and I read it, and I absolutely loved it. I've never read a story like it. So it surprised me that I liked it so much. But, I'm asking you with the bottom of my heart, is there any way, at ALL that you could possibly write and epilogue for this? I mean, I know this story is what, two years old? But.. I just can't help thinking that Reese was the one who got the blame for this.. Ah, this is driving me insane! Write me a god damn epilogue where somehow Reese and Lynx are together happy! Please? I can I make this small, but not so small request? I'm begging you! PLEASE! DO IT! I'll do anything! If that's possible.. ? Anyway, get to it! Snap, Snap! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! I'm going insane over here, because I'm trying to come up with my own happy ending, and I'm like, "Okay, she gets out, finds Lynx and they live happily ever after.." And then I smack my self because I know you can come up with something better than that. Ahh, seriously, I get sick to my stomach thinking that Reese is in prison for this. Make it happy! Make ME happy! PLEASE!
barkadaaa 2008-06-01 ch 25,	abusewow...that was intense I usually don't review... but homeslice, that. story. was. intense. kudos to you
Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-06-01 ch 25,	abusehum. I enjoyed reading this immensely, it was really interesting.. But I don't know... I loved the psycho-analyzation of the characters but... How to say this.. I'm afraid I feel as if the story is lacking something. I mean... 25 chapters, and the only character I felt I liked was Cougar, and he was rarely even there. I loved the ending again, though. How only she ended up with the blame, and how she took it. I think you have this morbid love for getting your main characters completely psycho. It's delightful, lol. They start out cool, and end up severely... Damaged. Yeah. I hope you don't find my words too harsh, or something, because I really did enjoy reading this, but.. yeah... It's as if there wasn't an important character here. Lynx? Too... Detached. Reese? It's like she never had a real break trough, tangible feelings. Wolf? Ended up dead and un-pried into. Meek? too deceiving. Mouse? I liked him quite a bit, but he turned out fairly creepy. I loved Cougar, though. :) Well, I hope you keep writing, thanks for sharing
Reminising Obsession 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abusenice.so far
Sarah 2008-04-30 ch 25, anon.	abuseHoly crap that was some incredible writing. While totally sick and twisted, your story was absolutely compelling. I especially like how absolutely creepy the beginning of the story is even though there's barely any actual strange things happening then. The ending was excellent too, although I'm still the tiniest bit curious about Lynx by the time its finished. Excellent story, and congrats on your SKoW award.
JemKay 2008-04-23 ch 25,	abuseWOW. This story is soo cool. I loved Lynx and Reese. I loved how they felt about each other, and how she loved him so much that she stayed by him, and didn't turn him in.
admit it.you luv me 2008-03-29 ch 25,	abuse=D...This story was...mean. But it was a nice story.

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