I really loved this. Really, really loved this. it was just...so unique, and creative, and sad...good for you! really amazing.

I liked it... I can relate to this in a way. My parents went through a bad break up. I have been bullied, verbally though... And I self harm... Tried suicide a few times... But stopped just in time...

that was powerful. >speechless

Okay, this was...
*drum roll*

...fantastic...

Okay?

Got it?

It was simply...fantastic...

I like the fact that each line is less than 5 words...it's only snippets of info, and in that way, this ROCKS! I like the portrayal of emotion.

Juvi

A knife.

A blood.

-a blood? l0lz. otherwise SO good. the structure is beautiful, and you managed to convey so much in so little. great job! =D

this is really really tragic, but i really like it. It gives a vivid stroy.

ooh. am i the first reviewer? some powerful stuff; i like how you make a 'rhythm' with the short phrases. write more! ^^

Deep, and well-detailed; its sad, but this is a true story for a lot of people. I applaud you for writing this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.