 Ryukoji 2006-01-17 . chapter 1From happy to sad. Spiffy |
 Lone Lily in the Garden 2006-01-13 . chapter 1Great poem!! I really like it!! |
 Professor Doctor 2005-12-08 . chapter 1That was sad... :( *Sniffles*
Ari |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2005-11-24 . chapter 1aw! ::hug:: too sad! but still a very good poem. |
 ADSpencer 2005-11-17 . chapter 1Awesome poem. I really relate to it. |
 Patricia Louise 2005-11-17 . chapter 1This is so sad...you're not a pain!! |
 Broken doll on a dirty shelf 2005-11-16 . chapter 1It lacks in punc. which makes it seem so sad. It's as if it's just a letter, and the writer didn't want to put effort into it, since it may only hurt more...that was excellent! -^^- I loved this! And it's helped make me stop thinking of that boy...don't you hate it when you crush so bad it hurts? -^^- This made me feel better...especially since I'm not able to see said crush.
Harlequin~Please fix me... |
 Novelist 2005-11-16 . chapter 1good, i like the lack of punctuation, makes a statement. |
 BellonaFlayreRiver 2005-11-16 . chapter 1i feel you. i like how this is all small and little sounding and well.. cute is a horrible adjective, but its the only one that comes to mind. lovely. |