*cracks up* I love it!

:) CD

well. shakespeare lovers everywhere will probably be delighted by this ending. just draw it out more. more characters, more character developement, etc. but its really good.

Wow, that is an absolutely adorable story. I really like it. The only possible suggestion I could give would be to make it longer. I don't know how you could do it, but you should, 'cause it's really good.

keep writing!

(oh yeah, this is marissa's friend/beta/therapist)

I really liked reading this story. It had just the right amounts of history, mystery and the supernatural. The language wasn't too complicated with hidden meanings, nor was it too simplistic and choppy. Good job!

I really enjoyed reading this. You covered relatively vast territory in not so many words, which I admire greatly, and I loved the setting of the haunted lighthouse. The plot germ was quite surprising, as well - I couldn't have guessed it.

Good work!