gorgeous haunting imagery that twirls and sighs like summer rain. i am not one who dwells in reality.

Twas very awesome!

I love the imagery. I don't get why Ms. Fennell didn't pick you for NCTE!

This is so beautiful!

I'm afraid I can't give a reason, but I think is really cool.

i love it.the chior poem, yes?no one can do imagry like you can honey.

Wow. The descriptions are amazing... more than amazing, spectacular! It's beautiful, great job!

this was a very beautiful poem, i loved the images you things you used in here, very well keep writing :)

...day-ung (dang)i seriously hate you*raging jealously*i dont think anyone in the world can write as beautifully as you do...you have talent my fine friendi love you

"in her dress she drowns (and) the boy, he sees" I love that line. It's beautiful. And the ending is perfect. The whole theme was really enjoyable. Great work, keep it up! ^.^

ella-la i love it.

and i love you.

very descriptive.

hope your feeling better...

oh i wrote a poem about you today in english.. maybe ill post it..

Love! Especially for 'cloud bruised lips' and 'butterfly eyes' this is so goregeous, and I can picture everything- especially the dress- I envision it as a satin ballroom gown the colour of blue-black raven wings.

I love this so much. The form/format is beautiful, flows and really works. I love your word choice as well. The oxymorons and imagery are wonderful. Really, it's all perfect & I'm adding it to my faves.