Oh my god that was awesome. The way you took the old nursery rhyme and fit it to a love story. I really loved it, a lot of people can connect to that.

AWESOME! WE'VE ALL BEEN SECOND RATE JILL AT ONE POINT OR ANOTHER!

I loved this! I haven't the faintest clue why...but the whole idea was fantastic. You did just...wonderful! -^^- But it kinda made me think of Half-Jack by the Dresden Dolls...lol. Except this time it was Jill's turn. Excellent.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

I think it's cool how you take the whole Jack and Jill thing to another perspective. I always thought that nursery rhyme was too simple. ^_^