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Reviews For: Bleak Dreams

Wena61 2006-06-03 ch 11,	abuseI really like this story, I check to see if there's a new chapter every week and every week am dissappointed, please continue it.
Wena61 2006-01-07 ch 11, anon.	abuseYour story is amazing, I've literally been glued to the screen for how ever long it took me to read it. I want to know what happens next!
dani-sgga 2005-12-12 ch 11,	abusewow!! u ARE a fast updater... and 3 chapters to boot!! very impressing!! enjoyed these chapters quite a lot... really did. and im very happy u finally otld us about marquis... YAY... but i cant help but feel that the situation is was much more complicated than what tommy is saying... and no, i dont mean that hes withdrawing info... it just seems that if something like this had happened in really life it wouldnt be so simplistic... the allience and marquis death... idk... i keep waiting for more info to pop up, u know? and im so happy u gave us some info on alucard too... i always wondered why giovanni feared him so much... its pretty cool that he was the first vampire (though i thought they were from romania.. not poland... but u used the polish word for vampire, though) cant wait for whats coming next! ~dani PS: something that kept bothering me before... in one of the first chapters when leslie and walker are researching raissas "ancestors," leslie said that there was a FORGED death ceritificate for raissas death (or one of her deaths anyway) but if it was centuries old... how could she possibly know it was forged and by looking at a file in the computer... if she had it in front of her MAYBE it would still be quite a stretch though... so i know. just wanted to share that with you
dani-sgga 2005-12-09 ch 8,	abuseoh! im loving ur story... its so good. deep characters and none of that ooh-im-vampire-i-live-for-blood-and-since-i-cant-die-im-going-to-spend-the-rest-of-my-life-partying crap, which is a nice breath of fresh air. specially like the relationship between walker and raissa, though i feel like it could be explained a lot more. its obvious that raissa likes him cuz he reminds her of marquis, and that he likes her cuz shes mysterious and drop-dead-gorgeous... but if its more than just a superficial atraction i think u should do a wee bit more delving into it. maybe ill get my wish at theyre dinner date? dont get me wrong... im not much for that romantic crap... i actually get annoyed by all the mushiness... (thats why im more of abitter-sweet ending than a happy ending type of girl... cuz theyre always so corny!) but u know... a little bit wouldnt hurt... hehehehe ok, well ive blabbed on for long enough. just one minor detail: i noticed that u have some careless spelling mistakes. like "day" in stead of "say" or "**" in stead of "sheet"... stuff like that. thought u should watch out for those. well, w/e... hope ur a fast updater. this is definitely going on my fav. list. -dani
VexiVicious 2005-12-07 ch 6,	abuseThis story is so absolutely AMAZING! Wonderfully written and great to read.. Very impressive... keep it up!
Lady Silver fang 2005-12-05 ch 3,	abuseI love your story, (though I have not finished it yet ^^) I love it, keep writing.
JC Peters 2005-11-26 ch 4,	abusem...Raissa story...greatness. I like the fact that her number was 13. I love that number! It's great. I love this story and can't wait for you to type up more of it.. there were a few typos but I don't remember what chapter they were in so I can't point them out specifically.
jason 2005-11-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseI have to day that i love this story, keep up the good work
iNarcissus 2005-11-20 ch 1,	abuseO, this is quite lovely my dear! I do enjoy a good vampire fiction, considering i write them myself, but that isnt the point. A defintly good first chapter, excelent jod describing the look of Raissa. How do you pronounce her name? Is is Ray-sa? Please to tell me. I love the story and please continue writing. Looking forward to the rest.

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