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| Damon Quartez 2006-07-10 ch 1,   | I absolutly love the formation of this piece |
| Darian Porter 2006-04-08 ch 1, | I love you |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2005-12-01 ch 1, | Yeah, I agree with that last reviewer about being torn. Usually when you say you're torn between things, you know in your heart what you really want. Go for it. Life's too short to wonder what would've been. Keep writing! :) |
| salvati 2005-11-17 ch 1, | I see how easily the title links to the piece - it's simple, really. :P As with most things, the powers of simplicity are understated, and yet the potency of the words is perfect to get the message across. Like a memory coming to you in flashes that you have to make a narrative out of yourself, your poem does exactly what the opening lines express: it captivates the reader with a meaning that is not readily visible on the page, but in the end there is a mid-way point, as your ending states, between the reader's interpretation and the true narrative of the poem. It's simple. :P P.S. Don't be torn between choices... if you can't figure out where you stand in regards to something/someone, it's usually because you're not standing at all. :D |
| youzi 2005-11-17 ch 1, | i can't link the title to the piece...but i found the line-breaks refreshing..the way every other line had one word dripping off into the next one... keep writing :D |
| Ishtar Johnston 2005-11-17 ch 1, | Must say I really appreciate the message of your piece. So few words yet such a distinct and colourful portrait of raw emotion. So glad I bothered to click the link... |