The delicateness of the abstactions you present are astounding. It is hard to grasp concepts in abstraction and have them come across as intended. There is a vacantness to this, a kind of speck in the void feeling, but it is a well planned kind of loneliness. Great work.

BEAUTIFUL. Astounding. I feel priviledged that you took the time to review my work. This poem is exquisite. I love it. You're going on my fav authors and this is going on my fav stories list.

wow... i really like this. the short stanzas in between the long ones really added to the poem. and i can relate to this too well... nice job. me likes it.!

sad, but beautifully written.

The forlorn wanderings made

Upon a road never trodden.

The path ahead seems to fade

Sad, but beautifully written.

I'm not much into the holidays, either.

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It sounds quite...empty...filling the reader with a giant hole of nothingness in the human heart. Like the voice of the poem expresses a sort of lonliness quite full of gripping emotion. Quite EMO! (eMO for emotional lol) haha.

loserz. ;)

Human loneliness...you've definitely captured this in your poem...I like 'wandering the edge of nothing', I've often had that feeling, but the good thing is that these things always pass.

Wow, it's really, really deep. Incredibley deep and amazinly wonderful. Awesome job!

*gasps* ever been in outter space? (not that I have..) but it seems it would feel like your poem makes me feel.. Floating, empty, a little upside-down, this sort of desperate calmness..

I like this poem a lot.. i think weve all felt that way at some point.. great job

I really like this. The imagery clearly reflects the sad feelings. I've written something along the same topic for one of my stories. Keep writing. I hope things get better for you. _

this poem is so ripe with emotion, beauty within sadness, simple langauge with a extraordinary powerful image. lovely.

Wow, I really love this. I love the way this is written. Especcially like the lines 'No hopes for the future, no heart for the past'. I love this poem! Thanx for the review.

This is so heartwrenchingly beautiful. I loved it and I can definetly relate. Excellent writing! QueenVixta

Beautiful, yet sad poem. Your emptiness is portrayed pretty critically in your work, nonetheless, it is still excellent. Thanx for the reviews, i appreciate each and every one of them.

Keep up the great work. Hope to see more work soon.