|Reviews for the irony|
| La Terraza 5/15/08 . chapter 1
Wow, see, I think this is the best one of your I've read thus far. I really like the tone you express in your writing, it's very...uniuqe.
| laughter at the funeral 5/6/06 . chapter 1
a curly haired girl in ribbons...that reminds me of victorian fashion...and that line "it's not too late to be beautiful"...really inspiring...very good job...oh and pls, review some of my poems if you have the time...
| crinkled aster ribbon 2/24/06 . chapter 1
"with roses cut into her eyes"
don't you love the irony?/"
| Aslan Israel 12/14/05 . chapter 1
Very nice, and I find myself wanting more. Brava.
| moscowsnow 12/8/05 . chapter 1
I love how it sort of... starts off normal, and then degenerates into wildness. It's beautiful.
| a lonely september 11/28/05 . chapter 1
"with roses cut into her eyes" that was one of my favorite lines. this was so pretty&pure awesome. : )
| A.D Williams 11/17/05 . chapter 1
Great piece !
| LaMSaErArNier 11/17/05 . chapter 1
This is incredible...The format was perfect, and the concept was beautifully captured and expressed...It's excellent.
| poetic abortion 11/17/05 . chapter 1
shiver inducing, creepy and the way you write it makes this so sexy. loved it, from the begining to bitter ending. love it.
| mizu no kokoro 11/17/05 . chapter 1
wow... it creeps me out to think aobut it... you did a great job
| sunday night sky 11/17/05 . chapter 1
the format in this is confused, but i think you just about manage to pull it off.