 Knightmare Elite 2006-06-10 . chapter 1As weird as this may sound, your poem created a perfect time shifting imagine. Like the ones they have in movies, where you time passes really fast and you see everything that happens in the process. That's how this was. I could see the curtains shutting, windows closing, lights dimming down to night as the wind plays a soft melody in the distance. I just love the imagery and of course this is a great poem. Yes I'm odd. |
 O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style 2006-05-10 . chapter 1...Interesting, very intriguing. It makes one think; your poem is deep, has more to it. It took me a while to understand the poem, or maybe it's only my brain which can't process complicated, beautiful, wonderfully written lines, but yea...A lot of thought was put into them, no? Lol, anyway, this was very well written. The ending was brilliant-
as small as the world
as large as alone.
Great job on this! Well done, bravo!^^ (You should "get" bored a lot) |