Reviews for The Gardener's Daughter

k. k. jeanne 2005-11-24 ch 1,	abusea lot of good assonance and plays on words. i liked "spade; spayed." i think that was my favorite. sound repitition did indeed make it a good read aloud. grammar: second stanza "rose's" should just be "roses." also i think "heart's in the second to last should just be "heart" or "hearts." nice poem though, with those two little errors.
Wingless Cherub 2005-11-21 ch 1,	abuse"Unless rose’s can secretly fly"--My favorite line throughout. This was so good! I can't remember what reknown poet this reminds me of, but when I think of it I'll let you know. In the meantime this is just too good. The way it flows, it just stuns me, takes my breath away. I haven't read anything on this site like it before. I'll admit that its the title that really attracted me--such a poetic title, and that's just the title. "Pefect, but The bushes have thorns"--that's another favorite line of mine. Makes me want to read more, which I think I'll go do right now.
Faithless Juliet 2005-11-18 ch 1,	abuseI love the way that you told this story. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.