Wow! That was very good. I love the way you write, it was very...deep. And it made me feel so sad! I liked the begining with the childrens laughter...it was quite chilling and the letter is so sad. And you expressed the plot very well, without it going into boring details. Anyway, it was really good!

Ooh... angsty. Interesting, too- I liked the beginning. Children's laughter. That was chilling, as well as the way her last thoughts were cut off-

Might I say it was a bit melodramatic? I really don't mean to insult, but... It had a rather cliche'd title, and the plotline was anything but unique. The letter at the end was also rather... curt.

Still, it was very well written. I liked the way you phrased things certain things, and didn't reveal much until the end. (Though most people would go for revenge... just a thought.)