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| Shadowhound 2005-12-12 ch 1,  | abuseagain, this is good, but it still seems kind of random. there is nothing wrong with that, i just prefer poems to have a little more substance to them from my perspective. then again, i'm writing a fantasy story, and i suck at poetry, ignore my opinion! regardless, this is pretty good. |