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| Veritalias 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere were parts that didn't rhyme, and parts that I didn't at all understand, but on the whole I liked it a lot. It really was very interesting. Your last Verses are always the best. They weem to add an air of finality to the whole thing... I wish I could do that, add that last line that manages to sum up the entire poem/story. But I can't. Which is why I like your work, because, my dear, you can. So don't ever stop. Please. |