There were parts that didn't rhyme, and parts that I didn't at all understand, but on the whole I liked it a lot. It really was very interesting.

Your last Verses are always the best. They weem to add an air of finality to the whole thing... I wish I could do that, add that last line that manages to sum up the entire poem/story.

But I can't. Which is why I like your work, because, my dear, you can. So don't ever stop.

Please.