Wow, I wish I could write like this. Very good rhymes.

Whoa, sorta sad and depressing. You brought about the mood really well...and I loved that rhyming too. It's a wonder how you could actually have so many rhyming words yet let the poem flow pretty well. Honestly, I find rhyming difficult to do so but you made it sound as if it came staight to you. Cheers...do drop by too.~C.F