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| SariumShadowshot 2005-11-18 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I wish I could write like this. Very good rhymes. |
| Crimson Flowers 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, sorta sad and depressing. You brought about the mood really well...and I loved that rhyming too. It's a wonder how you could actually have so many rhyming words yet let the poem flow pretty well. Honestly, I find rhyming difficult to do so but you made it sound as if it came staight to you. Cheers...do drop by too.~C.F |