I love this poem. It's short and to the point, but don't start with "and". It tends to take way from what you are trying to say. I know cause I do that a lot...But overall quite lovely.

i love your style, the rhymes are perfect and the sophisticated message really just "wow"s me

...hm...I don't know. Mixed feelings. The imagery is nice. Very gothic.

holy wow. haha. short, but effing awesome. the words were so powerful, esp. the last line. that just shows how much of our emotions we have control of. we strive to be good, but sometimes we give in. so true.

i love it. it's so sick and so true.

Fascinating discriptions of the human range of emotions. How we can be at once lost; but found.

Juliet.