Well stated. Great concept, very true. I disagree with Blue Dragon, I think the lack of capitalization on god is fine. Capitalizing is just a stupid literary rule and to take exception to it is petty (kinda the message of your poem). So double kudos to you!

I like this...religion is something to be handled carefully, and it's always influential...so one definitely has to be careful on how they potray their religion. Keep writing! Cheers! Do drop by too...~C.F

I completely agree with you in your concept, BUT if you are as religious as you seem, could you not have some respect and capitalize the "G" in God! I don't mean to be unpleasant, but it is somewhat hypocritical and takes away meaning from your message.