Wow: another way of looking at your world.It is true though... As Agent K said in MIB, "A person is smart. People are dumb, panicky, dangerous animals and you know it." It will be interesting to see where you go with this.I found some comma errors, mainly places where they were missing. There were also some fragments. Most of them needed a colon to connect them to the previous sentences. Other than that, this was well written. (not saying it was perfect however: "Our name though" sounds like an afterthought. Try "Our real name is blah blah blah...")Keep writing!Peace out!PS: I finally updated! (no applause...) Just to break the silent mood of our group... if only for a literal second...

interesting. i am fascinated about your views concerning the population. it is true that people are becoming more and more populous, ut they don't need to be wiped out, they'll do that themselves. the goverment will create some weapon, and that weapon will be used against some uppity forgein country, and the population will decrease.Your idea is still fascinating. please tell me when you plan on writing you next story.