THATS a good one!

Strong ending, and you have an impressively wide range of vocabulary. An interesting combination that made this stand out. Nice job:)

It seems a bit like a stereotpye issue. No, that doesn't mean I didn't like it, I loved it actually, but it sounds like two different "styled" people, flirting and wanting to be closer but can't. Even if I'm wrong, this was a great poem, it really made me think (considering the guys I tend to like) unless this isn't about the opposite sex. Still, wonderful.

Harlequin~Please fix me...