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| Kelsey 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHATS a good one! |
| in theory 2005-11-18 ch 1,  | abuseStrong ending, and you have an impressively wide range of vocabulary. An interesting combination that made this stand out. Nice job:) |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseIt seems a bit like a stereotpye issue. No, that doesn't mean I didn't like it, I loved it actually, but it sounds like two different "styled" people, flirting and wanting to be closer but can't. Even if I'm wrong, this was a great poem, it really made me think (considering the guys I tend to like) unless this isn't about the opposite sex. Still, wonderful. Harlequin~Please fix me... |