I like the idea of scratching beneath the surface and revealing the woman's personality through her possesions, but try for a more natural and less dramatic flow, as this seemed a little forced, particularly the first two sentences.

Heh...wow. The way you describe looking in someone elses' junk makes me think what you'd find looking through my junk. I can see it now...

"Lets see...eh, two guys doin' it, razor blades, sheep Pez despenser, attempted writing, HIM c.d., stalker pictures of Wentworth Miller, note to the guy she's like for 4 years-oh look! A bouncy ball!"

O.o Yeah, that was a scary look into my "Sins"... Excellent piece. I loved this, just...excellent.

Harlequin~Please fix me...