You gave me the most lovely review- and you actually got my story- /gasp/, not like the person who apparently thinks it's not fantasy if you grow wings.I'd like to know what they're on.WELL, anyways, I like this, especially the beginning and ending, and how they are similar, and how you use 'without' to tie the beginning together. Beautiful, darling.

~M.M.

yet another great poem. I love it just a great all around description of a crush. (hope it all worked out :)) but back to the poem. Great work, keep it up Amen! Lets get the hell outta here!

Wow, this really relates the sensation of having a crush so well - the almost exaggerated emotions, both up and down!

I especially liked the line "Your smile devastates // like the storm within my heart". It really captured the dramatic emotions you can feel, both when you're in love or when you have an unrequited crush.

Great job.