whiny? by far - no, it doesn't seem soI rather like where the line breaks are :) ~Lou~

I don't think it's at all whiny. I know how you felt. Sometimes I feel the same way. In fact, I'm feeling that way right now but ne way, as long as you write from your heart, that's all that matters.

Wow... this reminds me of... "something"... of mine that you read... Looks like we have a bit in common! :D Anyway.. yah, that's my "review". I'd give some sorta notes, but seeing as how I'm not really the greatest writer myself... I'll stay out. :)