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| N.E. Olson 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseLove the imagery. Very poignant. |
| K. L. Kirby 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abusewow, i love this poem... great job... excellent job (i should say) ~kario |
| KonekOniko 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseA tad bit long, but the emotions were clear and heart wrenching. Love the last three lines =) |
| phthalo blue 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseGood job. This is an excellent poem. I love the part, "Gone in three minutes, because of two stupid errors, and one mistake." |