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| KonekOniko 2005-11-23 ch 1,  | abusepersonally, i think this is your best yet =) it's very...well, you know what i'm going to say. good job even though i have trouble with words right now, lol. btw, do ya want some help with the stanzas? |
| phthalo blue 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it and I love the line "With others I stampede into their many worlds." It brings so many images to my mind. I also love the incorporation of mythology in the poem. |
| warriorwoman 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abusewow, really loved this. It describes life in a great way. |