wow. pretty damn good. heh, they dont put me up front cause I have no people skills, and I am one sarcastic bastard. I would probably get fired if they put me up front. ever seen ghost world? yeah, her job at the movie theater, thats me. anyway. nice write. yet another person going on my favorite authors list tonight.

wow, i've never seen a poem like this really, full of in between the line reading~ i won't pretend to understand all the motivations behind this excellent piece, but i do get a sense of your feelings through it~ how cruel and insensitive this world can be... good work~

keep writing!

Ah, your review of my latest explains the novelty mystery title of your recent here. (i like your serious tone)

So instead of taking it, you should've pulled a Dude, Where's My Car trick: after her comment, say over and over "And then, would you like fries with that!?"

You'd still feel like an a$$h*le but a pretty funny $h!the@d.

And no one would have a clue you were a great poet... spitting in their food.